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Posted 2022-12-19 09:56:03
sounds great! I assumed he would be something you'd love writing because of the COD inspiration behind his creation (which was so random LMFAO). after Christmas sounds good. take however much time you need, I don't really care about it being done ASAP. will be looking forward to what you come up with!

harupawz
#65422

Posted 2022-12-20 22:17:39
Character Name: Scar
Character Pronouns: he / him
Visual Reference[Required]:https://photos.app.goo.gl/qAjU8FciXirz2rhW7
Type of Commission: 400 to 500 words one
Form of Payment: Marking app
Short Explanation about Character: when Scar was younger he was super loveable and kind but when he got older he became colder
Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: a way he got he's scars and left he's home pack, maybe like he wanted to go for adventure and then got attaked
Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: the max age I would like him is 3 years old
And have fun
Jackal
#75258

Posted 2022-12-20 22:18:02
Character Name: Scar
Character Pronouns: he / him
Visual Reference[Required]:https://photos.app.goo.gl/qAjU8FciXirz2rhW7
Type of Commission: 400 to 500 words one
Form of Payment: Marking app
Short Explanation about Character: when Scar was younger he was super loveable and kind but when he got older he became colder
Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: a way he got he's scars and left he's home pack, maybe like he wanted to go for adventure and then got attaked
Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: the max age I would like him is 3 years old
And have fun
Jackal
#75258

Posted 2022-12-20 22:21:18
@Jackal

It's good to see you again, thank you for commissioning me once again! I'll definitely be accepting this, sounds like a lot of fun. Can't wait to write up how he's gotten his scars! I think him leaving his pack and getting attacked would be lovely!

I do want to ask, near the end did you want him going towards a new pack, creating a new pack of his own, or remaining as a lone wolf for now?

Also, are his eyes silver/white?

Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-20 22:31:57
No problem
I do want him going to a new pack, he's eyes are sliver, I can't wait to see what you create:3
Jackal
#75258

Posted 2022-12-20 22:47:13
@Jackal

Lovely! I'll try to get started on it tomorrow or sometime this week. I'm assuming it'll get finished after Christmas but I may be able to squeeze it out before for you! ^^

Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-20 22:56:28
Alright thank you, I can't wait seeing you can create
Jackal
#75258

Posted 2022-12-21 16:45:04
Completed work for @Lisitsa#32507! [Turn around time, 1 week; about 1 to 2 hours~ of actual writing time][total words 439]



The falling sun began to slowly set over the West, turning the sky a startling orange colour with red and pink hues tied into it. The birds slowly began to quiet down as a large iron coloured wolf strode up a cliff, rocks crumbling and falling beneath his paws. His eyes seemed to glow under the fading sunlight as he padded around, looking as though he was playing.

Soon enough he felt a presence, causing him to turn his head and notice a strange wolf. Cocking his head, his ears twisted to the sides curiously. His composure made him appear friendly and welcoming. He took his time carefully stepping down from the cliff before padding over to the wolf and taking a seat in front of them. His tail wrapped around his paws as his dark, pupil-less eyes stared into the eyes of the unfamiliar wolf.

"Hello stranger," he said nonchalantly, his eyes holding a warm glow.

Atardecer, the leader of the Ateshgah Pack took his time talking with the new wolf. Exchanging stories and laughs, though some were sad as well. It wasn't long before the once bright orange sky fell and turned dark blue, twinkling stars dotting the limitless skies above them. Upon the sun fading away, a full moon began to slowly rise, replacing the once intense sunlight with a ghastly moonlight. The air surrounding the wolves became heavier as an eerie, yet comforting fog surrounded the wolves.

As the sky continued to turn darker, Atardecer's coat began to shift and turn. White patches began to twist and bend all along his body. The moonlight illuminated the patches, causing them to hold almost a luminous glow. The stark contrast between the iron and white patches bewildered the wolf before Atardecer. It was evident to him by the reactions he received. He watched as the wolf's eyes scanned his now distorted coat, their maw slightly agape in awe. The longer the wolf stared, the brighter the patches became. Before long, the wolf noticed Atardecer's eyes began to spin and swirl. They were no longer pupil-less. No, now they were bright, holding the same light that the moonlight emitted. He watched in amusement as the wolf's eyes darted from Atardecer's eyes, to his coat, back to his eyes continuously.

Letting out a soft chuckle, he shook his head slightly.

"Come now, you have much more to learn about these lands." He stood up, shaking his coat out before padding deep into the forest surrounding them. Atadecer didn't take the time to check if the wolf was following him, he could feel their curious gaze weighing on his back.


Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-21 22:43:35
I absolutely adore it! Again, thank you so much!

Lisitsa
#32507

Posted 2022-12-23 14:46:55
I really want a Cannibalistic lore for this link I have a few bases but not the experience to write them! She was my first identical twin I've breed but I was sad to discover that her twin was deceased. So, I wanted to put a twist on it, and come up with some story of how she cannibalized her twin.

I have a starting line if you would like to go off of it!  (Beginning here: "Katara was always a troubled pup. She was constantly fussy, and nothing ever seemed to please the young one. One would think as she got older it would get better, but not in Kataras case. She got worse.")
Corgi
#54862

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