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Posted 2022-12-23 18:47:43 (edited)
@Corgi

Ooooh, that sounds extremely interesting. I would love to write something along those lines. Did you want the twin to be eaten whilst they're still pups as opposed to being in the womb/adulthood? Are there any other major factors you wanted included? Like fights, the parents reacting, the pack as a whole reacting, etc.? Also, how long were you looking for this to be, and were you looking to pay with Base Apps? I'll happily accept that as payment! ^^ I do want to mention that I probably won't get to your comm until after New Years. If you're willing to wait that long, I'd be more than happy to accept this!!

There's also a huge chance I'll message you with questions and confirmations on things as I write as well. ^^

Lastly, could you also fill out the form please? ^^ It just keeps everything tidy and helps me learn the character and know exactly what you want from me + payment type + details + more :)

Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-23 20:19:32 (edited)
All good! My bad I didn't see the form at the bottom! 

Character Name: Katara
Character Pronouns: she/her
Visual Reference[Required]:
Type of Commission: Lore
Form of Payment: gc
Short Explanation about Character: She's very troubled/mentally unstable in the aggressive sense, and claims to hear voices. Her actions can be unpredictable and she hasn't been known to show others affection.
Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: Seeing as she was a twin, and her twin is deceased I just want to take a dark twist on it. She'd have cannibalized her twin while they were still pups, the "voices in her head" told her to do it as to gain her twins strength. Before her cannibalizing her sibling, her sibling was the more liked twin. And this made Katara very jealous. At first the pack wasn't aware as to what had happened to her twin, as they found her at the outskirts of their territory. It wasn't until they found katara and saw her twins blood on her. She was exiled and was found by a dark arts practicing wolf (the story can end off here if need be!)

I haven't thought of a name for her twin so i'm completely open with you deciding the twins name/gender.

Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: nope!
Corgi
#54862

Posted 2022-12-23 20:23:00
@Corgi

No worries, it definitely got drowned out at the bottom xD This is actually super exciting and going to be a lot of fun! Do you have a length you want me to stay close to?

Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-23 20:26:28
2-3 paragraphs? I think that's about the length? If it goes over i'm not too upset!
Corgi
#54862

Posted 2022-12-23 20:29:17
@Corgi

I'll do my best to stay within 2-3 paragraphs! However, the amount of detail will most likely be miniscule. I could always write a longer one (purely because I'm super interested) and a shorter one. If it ends up being too expensive with the longer version, we can go with the shorter one! ^^

I'm just worried that with everything you asked for, I may need around 2 pages~

Karma
#75898

Posted 2022-12-23 20:58:22 (edited)
No problem!! I we can absolutely work something out!
Corgi
#54862

Posted 2023-01-07 12:35:54
Character Name: Myla
Character Pronouns: she/she wolf
Visual Reference[Required]: Myla
Type of Commission: backstory lore
Form of Payment: SC.
Short Explanation about Character: Recently entered current pack Riva Glade pack. Personalities: can be sassy, smart, independent, imaginative, has a bit of a lack of self confidence or self-esteem and can be standoffish.
Short Idea/Explanation of what you're looking for: lore as in just for her backstory as she may be one of the starting wolves for my Impossible mode challenge.
Anything else I may need to know/Extra/Other: She or one of her future pups will be starting my Impossible mode cave challenge. Currently not starting it yet as I want my next lead to have a part in it.
Amarilla
#57044

Posted 2023-01-08 17:42:42
@Amarilla

Heya! So I'm a bit confused as to what you'd like me to write for her backstory. I'm about to bombard you with questions, I apologize! ^^ Please don't take it in a bad way, I just want to learn as much as I can to do my best! :)

I. Do you want me to include her just joining the pack? If so,
      I. How does the pack treat her?
      I. Does she have any friends/make any friends?
      I. Any wolves in particular that might dislike her?
      I. What's her ranking roughly within the pack?

II. What is the Impossible mode challenge/Impossible mode cave challenge? I know you mentioned it's not currently active, but I would need some details to be able to explain it. If Myla is a potential contestant, she'd need it explained to her by another wolf. :)

III. Does she have a mate if she has pups? If so
      III. What is her mate's name?
      III. What are her pups name's?
      III. What does her mate and pups look like?
     
There might be more, but I can't think right now. >.<

Completed work for @Jackal#75258! [Turn around time, 8 days[sent prior in DMs]; about 1 to 2 hours~ of actual writing time][total words 710]



"Why can't you just abide by the pack laws," Scar's father huffed, his mother adding in a defeated sigh. Scar rolled his eyes before laying down, resting his head on his paws. The silvery blue colour of his father's eyes blazed sharply, intensely. The large black wolf scolding him was his father, Nosferatu. The silent, but disappointed silver and white wolf was his mother, Ghost.

"You used to be so considerate, kind, loving even! Now it's like you can't tolerate this pack anymore," Ghost whined out softly. Her hazel eyes were a turmoil of exhaustion, anger, sadness, and defeat. Scar inhaled sharply, his ears swiveling backwards. His silver eyes glazed over, the colour draining from his eyes.

"I just wish you'd let me go-" Scar began, his voice monotone before his dad cut him off with a snarl.

"Fine, go! Survive on your own," Nosferatu growled. Scar sighed silently, that wasn't what he wanted. He just wanted to explore the world, embark on an adventure.

"We have no need for a wolf who doesn't pull their own weight. Get out," his father continued. Scar looked at his mother before looking back at his father. He stood up slowly before shaking his coat out. Turning, he left the pack grounds without a word.

The large wolf was an ombre of grey and white patterns. Hints of silver and even dark grey swirled along his body. It gave him the perfect camouflage for hunting in the winter, snowy months. Even during the summer when he was high in the mountains, where the snow remained year round. Though, it was poor for hunting down within the forests at the bottom of the mountains. This forced Scar to hunt prey he normally wouldn't on his own. Even so, Scar managed on his own quite well for several days. That was until he tried to hunt an elk herd on his own.  His leg ended up getting wounded and left him with a noticeable scar. It hindered his hunting capabilities whilst it was healing, which left Scar hungry and weak.

Scar looked around his surroundings calmly. His breath curled up in the air as it left his muzzle. He was laying in an abandoned den that he happened to come across. Low snarling quickly caught Scar's attention. His ears shot up and his head raised quickly. He stood up carefully, silently. Sniffing the air, he caught the scent of an unknown wolf.

Scar silently stepped out of the den, lowering himself near the ground. His eyes narrowed as he scanned his surroundings. His hackles raised and his ears were pinned against his head.

"What are you doing in my den," a wolf snarled in a raspy voice.

"It was abandoned, don't lie-" Scar began, his voice holding a harsh snarl. He was cut off by the other wolf snapping at him and lunging towards him. Scar snarled and lunged forwards, locking onto the wolf.

It became a flurry of fur, blood, and snarls as the wolves fought. Scar would thrash and slash open the unknown wolf's belly. The wolf would claw at Scar's head, managing a deep wound across his face. Scar's body was also littered with scars by the end of the fight. Bite marks and claw slashes were scattered amongst his legs, sides, belly, and backend. The back of his neck had a large scar that was a mixture of a bite and claw mark.

With all the scars, Scar managed to come out victorious. He managed to slash the unknown wolf's face and blind them. They quickly bled out from their belly wound as well.

Scar lay on the ground, bleeding as he stared up at the night sky. He felt eyes on him and he slowly pulled himself up. His body was heavy and his eyes struggled to stay open.

"You fought bravely and well, follow us young one," a low voice echoed out towards Scar. His eyes narrowed and he looked around him, surveying his surroundings. Nothing seemed malicious or underhanded, from what he could tell.

"Ah, what the hell," he muttered. Scar slowly made his way towards the voice, his paws dragging in the dirt with every step. Little did he know, it would be the perfect new beginning.


Karma
#75898

Posted 2023-01-09 02:31:17 (edited)
1. Mainly her backstory before she joins my Riva Glade pack.
1. The pack treat her warmly as she's taken the place of a former hunting party which got disbanded because a much loved pack member called Penumbra aka Pen died/retired.
1. Her hunting team and the cave den members (Impossible mode cave). She's a finisher and can be a stalker in her hunting team.
1. Nothing yet.
2: Impossible mode project credited by AngryTiger [Item_Hoarder] #10140
my take might tweak the rules if necessary.
My breeding projects
3. No mate or pups yet.
Amarilla
#57044

Posted 2023-01-09 20:33:55
Hey, do u do pack lore?

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