The Ghost Lands RP(private multi-member RP)

Aster glanced between Raksha, the demon, and the human. I'm not ready for this, she though, panic starting to rise in her chest. Did she listen to the ghost queen, for fear of angering the otherworldy ruler, or take the advice of the trapped human? Did she leave the human behind and run, or try to free them? The silver-haired girl glanced towards the door of the castle. If I ran, could I make it?

“Silly humann.” The demon clicked it’s beak gleefully. “You are already taken, and thiss one-“ It flicks one claw at the girl. “Is a lovely piece of traitorous bait.” It signals to the closed door “There will be no escape, only freedom on the lady’s good word.”

I pace back and forth in the hole "  Ugh.... why did I do it" I say to myself " foolish "

She tried to get the chains off her wrist but she gave up awhile later

A ghost spoke next to Aster. "Don't try it, she'd find out and put you in prison as well," The ghost said, this ghost was a prince.

(A PRINCEEE!! WHAT)

I was trying everything I could think of to escape the cold prison " Let ... me ....out... I command you"

Despite her fear, Aster hurried to the door. If I'm going to survive, maybe even free the other human, I've got to follow the rules. "I'll be back for you," she reassured the person in the pit, "Don't worry."

( yep. A prince. )

The ghost prince sighed. "Human, I'd be careful if I were-" He began, but he was too late, another pit opened below Aster, dropping the girl into it.

(Oh shit)

I was beginning to feel the cold around me " Someone.. please..." she said  pounding the wall as hard as I could " anyone!"

"Hush, human, you'll bring her back and we'll both be in trouble," The prince spat.

" yes sir" I say and just stared at the wall absentmindedly " Whatever you say"