Need Advice For Writing Lore
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Need Advice For Writing Lore
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Posted 2022-02-25 19:39:54
But, I'm having trouble writing lore for my pack. My pack's name is The Golden Ichor Pack and it has a god, goddesses theme. This is the pack's introduction (wish to make it a little better): After each hunt golden blood seeps from the wounds of the hunters. The gold liquid is thick, each lick washes the god's blood away. This pack is descendants of the gods and goddesses who bled this golden ichor in wars. They know where they come from, do you? Some of the pack has little bio pieces, ex: Hermes bio https://www.wolvden.com/wolf/3893005 "A mixed eye wolf was adopted at a young age with his brother by Yvette, Hermes stayed with the pack, while his brother Loki left to find his own." Overall, I love the way I have started, but I still think with a little help the lore could be better. Thank you for viewing and maybe helping me. |
 Clarissa๐ซGยน Mela Carrier #54477 |
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Posted 2022-02-25 19:51:55
My Pack Lore Has A Similar Theme Surrounding Gods And Something That Has Helped Me Is Figuring Out Either How The Pack Started Or How The Pack Works With The Concept. Then You Can Use This As A Foundation To Build The Rest Of Your Lore. You Can Use This Link To Help You: Creating A Fictional Culture (Its Helped Me Alot) If You Want, I Will Allow You To Use My Lore As An Example To Get Started โ๏ธ -The Robotic Eye: Pack Lore- โ๏ธ |
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Posted 2022-02-25 19:59:55
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Clarissa๐ซGยน Mela Carrier #54477 |