Redesign my dorite and sky base pup(refunded studding and GC!)

I am obsessed with black, red, white, cream and yellow markings. Agouti, carnage, invert cross and cross, predator my top favorites followed by highlights. Then I got rump strips, and any stripes are good :3 

I look at the design I would take off all the markings and goes does it look good with one of the marking only, how about two. Dreamer’s sibling one and Izzy’s sibling one are eye catching but I felt like they are still missing something. Maybe it’s colouring. 

@Juliet vermillion quick question when will this contest end?

It will end when I find what I am seeking :) so far dreamer and Izzy’s first design are close to what I seek but not quit there :3

15 GC for winner increase the prize 

Here's a pair of designs for you! Hope you like them!

Sibling One

Sibling Two

I have a pair for you! I hope you like them!

ok I tweaked my first sibling a wee bit. See if this is any better.

Original Entry (left the markings in my first post to save space):

And the redo/recolor:

I'm also working on new entries so I'll post them here as well:

Sibling 3

Wolf 1  Wolf 2 

and another set 

Sibling 5

can't see the picture @izzyCat91