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Blistering moon

Blistering moon
Posted 2022-09-23 20:56:46 (edited)
Hello! I've been thinking...what if I made a BIG story?
Blistering moon will be a story about a pet doggo forced into a snowy biome and will be forced to live on their own. Please DO NOT respond to this thread. I will not remove it, but will PM you about not doing it again :)

Character:
link : Copper- main character
Status: Alive
Breed: Australian Shepard Mix

link :Tap- Major side character
Status: Alive
Breed: Shepard Mix

Free speech: link
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-09-23 21:32:33 (edited)
PROLOUGE
It was a snowy night. The howling sound of the bitter cold wind was the only thing anybody could hear. There was a few voices in the air, and it was the sounds of dogs. There was a soft pitter patter of canines. Some eyes glittered in the darkness. There was a few dogs that came out and started snarling, biting at the air. "City mutts! Get them out!" Spat some noises. Other dogs chanted, "Forest pelts! A menace!" There was ripping and shredding of blood and skin, when all of a sudden..it stopped. There was a shaking in the air, and the world split in half. Some dogs jumped out of the way. Some others couldn't stand to it and fell into the bitter darkness. Other dogs decided to flee. That was the day..that the Blistered moon broke.
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-09-23 21:52:11 (edited)
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°•Lady FizzWart•° [NC]
#79157

Posted 2022-09-25 18:26:13
CHAPTER 1
It was a dim evening sunset, the sleepy Sol diving under the earth. Copper stood on a fence, watching the Sleeping Sol. He looked on into the forest, smelling all the new scents. He loved the scents and sounds of his territory. There was a call. "Copper! Come here boy!" Copper jumped off the fence and walked to his owner. The human pet Copper and rubbed his belly. He then sloped away to eat his food bowl when he spotted his best friend, Tap. Tap walked to Copper and piped up. "Hey Copper!"  He said, Copper wagged his tail. "Hey, tap!" He said. He soon ate his food when his human called him and his friend over. "Guess what, pups? Were going on a trip!" Copper wagged his tail furiously. He loved trips! He went outside to the wheel-box and hopped in. Tap also came in the wheel-box, excited. Their human came in and started to drive. Copper watched as all the trees and rocks and buildings. They drive for about half an hour when there was a violent shake. The human came out of the wheel-box and checked it. There was a more violent shake, breaking the wheel-box. Copper and Tap jumped out when there was a Crack in the Earth. Their human screamed, and Copper and Tap tried to drag their human out of the earth Crack, but Copper slipped and soon Tap. Their human screamed, and soon fell into the darkness. Copper screamed as he saw his human fall. He froze, afraid that his human was dead. He barked, again and again for about 10 minutes. There was no sound. Copper's heart shattered. He soon began to cry, and so did Tap, both huddling eachother in sadness of their loss of their owner.
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-09-29 19:26:22
CHAPTER 2
It was now a full moon out. Copper still felt bad about their furless. Tap earlier separated from copper and lay down to sleep. Copper looked at the hole, softly barking to see if their skinless was still alive. He gave up and walked over to Tap. He lay down next to Yap and spoke. "Hey..you okay?" Tap looked up at Copper. "I guess..well, beside were now homless.." Copper's ears flattened. "That's...true.." he replied. He shook his head, trying to not think about the loss of their home and their furless. Tap was already asleep, so Copper thought it was best if he fell asleep too. It was a while when Cooper woke up in a strange place. He walked around on the blue grass and looked at the purple sky. His eyes widened when he saw the moon. It was red, violently shaking, cracking. He was horrified. He decided to run, run far away. He saw a forest with bushes and trees, and looked behind him. The ground was cracking open. He broke into a run, passing all the trees. He soon began to see deformed dogs.
WARNING, THIS PART INCLUDES BLOOD AND GORE, IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE, PLEASE SKIP THIS PART.
Copper saw all of the dogs, some with their eyes gouged out, some with no tails, but instead a string of nerve. Some sogs had guts. Others had blood on their face. He came to a halt when he saw the wolf in front of him. It was part bone, part flesh. Some skin was falling out. It saw Copper and dashed at him. As soon as it slashed at him, Copper fell into a darkness.
Copper woke up in a flash, terrified. Tap was awake too. They stretched and went on the move. They walked through the trees and logs, and also shared a Squirrel they found in a bush. They soon heard a growl. Copper perked up. "Who's there?" He tried to boldly say, when a flash of fur pinned him down. "Who trespasses!?"
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-10-07 17:24:26
CHAPTER 3
Copper shook his head in suprise. He turned to look up at a broad male wolf. His brown fur with white unders and piercing yellow eyes. "I repeat..who.trespasses!?" Tap walked closer. "L-look, were just w-walking past the forest.."  the wolf growled at Tap, making the inferior dog back up, shrinking. The wolf turned back to look at Copper. "If I see you back on this forest, city mutt, don't expect to be alive." Copper stared in wild confusion. "H-how did you know I'm from the city?" The wolf sneered at Copper. "You reek of it. You wear a collar. Now go!" Thw wolf pushed both dogs out of the way, and the two slumped away. Tap looked over at Copper. "You okay?" Copper nodded, and they continued on their walk. They walked and walked until evening. They settled down for the night, and had a good night. They woke up in the morning and walked on. They shared a Squirrel and continued on. As they walked, there was a bitter storm. The thunder roared. "What was that?" Jumped Tap. Copper shrugged and they broke into a run.they ran and ran, and they ended up in a small cave. They huddled together, as it was cold. They ended up falling asleep.

Authors Note: this was a bit lazy, sorry yall.
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-10-21 17:57:28
CHAPTER 4
Copper woke up, shivering. The storm has hit the two pretty hard. Tap was already looking outside, watching the sol rise. Copper walked up to the mouth of the cave and watched with Tap. Copper just sat there, watching the sol. It was beautiful. It had a red-orange pelt and was rising above the land. The two dogs looked at each-other and decided to try to walk home. They set on their way. They found a dead Squirrel and split it. They decided to walk some more, until Tao stopped. "Tap? What's wrong?" Copper asked. Tap's hackles stood on end. "There's a group of dogs. I can smell it" Copper's ears flattened.oh no .. he thought. They both broke into a run, panting. Copper looked behind him, his eyes widening at what he saw. About a dozen of dogs, chasing them, drool dripping from their jaws, eyes bloodshot. They were shouting things like, "Get them! Get those city mutts!" and, "Run before we use your pelts as claw sharpening!" Copper was in a frenzy, and he and Tap ran until they couldn't smell or hear the dogs anymore. Copper panted and looked at Tap. Tap looked back at him, and looked up. He started to wag his tail. Copper was confused, and looked up. He saw the familiar buildings. They decided to run into the city, barking for any other dogs or even a cat. They then heard a group of other dogs barking. They ran over to the sound to stop in their tracks. About half a dozen of other dogs, and one of them, a seemingly female Boarder collie, walked up to them. "Who are you guys?" The words seemed friendly. Copper looked at all of the dogs. There were collars on all of them. Copper looked at Tap, who started to wag his tail. Finally, a group of dogs to live with!
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2022-11-05 08:46:22
CHAPTER 5
Copper walked up to the group of collard dogs. "I am Copper, and this is my friend Tap. We got lost and were looking for a way to survive." Tap agreed. The boarder collie nodded understandingly. "I see. Well, my name is Anna, and this is some of the group." Copper was surprised. Group? Anna introduced the 5 other dogs, a Frenchie male named Bob, a golden retriever female named Jess, a great Dane male named Chew, a dalmation male named Spot, and a Husky female named Loki. Tap looked at the other dogs and wagged his tail. "Copper, this might be our chance to find another home!" Copper nodded excitedly. "Your right!" Anna smiled at them. "Well, you are going to have to run a couple of tests." Tap's smiles soon started to fade as he stated, "tests? What tests?" Copper was confused as well. What kind of tests? Smarts, skills? I dont even want to think about fighting.. Bob piped up. "They look like they could do the test, what do yall think?" The 5 dogs nodded in agreement. Anna walked over to a small door on the ground, grabbed it with her teeth, and opened it. The other dogs motioned to go in. Copper gave Tap a look, and soon followed them, Tap close behind. Copper saw all the other dogs and widened his eyes in fear.

will make part 2 of chapter 5 later
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

Posted 2023-11-30 15:24:20
Haha I'm backkkkkk
CHAPTER 5 PART 2
What Cooper saw was a large empty room with a lit-up square in the middle. There was rubber-like rope around the square, and some dogs were already fighting. Other dogs were chanting one dog's name or the other. Anna smiled proudly as the two dogs fought. After a while, one of them
--BLOOD AND GORE WARNING--
ripped out the others throat. The injured dog fell to the floor, blood seeping geom the large wound. It breathed up and down, up and down...until it lay, lifeless.
Anna smirked and jumped into the middle of the ring.
"Welcome back, fierce fighters." She said, as the cows went wild. "Today, we have some new testers, so let's see if they're worthy of fighting with us." The crowd was chanting "testers! Testers!"
"First, in one rig, we have the new dog from the confines of the outside world, Copper!" Copper worriedly walked into the ring, Tab looking on worriedly. "And, in the other ring, we have a steong-willed  Stray, with 3 victories!" A large Doberman stepped into the ring, clearly scarred. He snarled at Copper, who gulped. This wasn't going to be easy.
HAHAHAHA I RETURNNN lets see if i can keep the momentum!
WolfFox 🐺 🦊
#66302

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