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Posted 2022-03-30 12:20:50 (edited)
(I was unable to put this in a message so I put it here.) I have completed the lore request for Winter Moon. Please read the entire lore. Feel free to make suggestions or ask for changes before I sign the lore off to you! Let me know when you are satisfied and I will officially sign the lore off to you. Please keep in mind to put credit for me somewhere. Let me know what I could improve on in the future if needed. If you have any friends looking for writers, mention my Lore Commissions! If you have any other requests, feel free to submit another form :) Courteously, Midflare Frost ❄️ LORE: Deleted for privacy. Look at magicwhitewolf for the full lore. |
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Posted 2022-04-03 15:33:04
question in this part of the lore >2 Weeks Later is the sales wolf telling the wolf from Noel Winter Eve pack that Little luck is not worth taking in? question two are Copper and Artemis from the Noel Winter Eve pack? to me while reading it , it sounded like they were. i did forgot to mention to you that the Noel Winter Eve pack looks after all pack members even ones that disabilities. at one time they had a wolf that was blind and deaf ; the records were saved. |
 magicwhitewolf #25645 |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:24:03 (edited)
You are good :) Yes, the saleswolf is just a wolf running a stall and tells Copper not to take her. But Copper does anyway. Yes, Copper and Artemis are the wolves who adopted Winter from your pack. I have taken a note about the pack's history. Is there anything that needs to be altered? Courteously, Midflare Frost ❄️ |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:26:58
just that Copper and Artemis are from the Noel Winter eve pack needs to be more clear . is there anything else you need to know about my pack? |
magicwhitewolf #25645 |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:28:08
I will insert more information about Copper and Artemis. Thanks :) Courteously, Midflare Frost ❄️ |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:30:07
i only mention that because it wasn't that clear to me. more information about Copper and Artemis would be appreciated. |
magicwhitewolf #25645 |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:31:42
I will give you an update when I finish. Courteously, Midflare Frost ❄️ |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:41:06
i hope this sin't too much to ask. i will save another 1,000 Sc . i have question for you. i have this wolf who is my breeding male > https://www.wolvden.com/wolf/4342219 . now my question could you wrote a lore for him that would help him stand out as a potential stud for other users? of course i will fill out a form for him. please feel free to ask any questions about Millow as you need. |
magicwhitewolf #25645 |
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Posted 2022-04-03 16:43:57 (edited)
Fill out another form and I will look into it :) Also I have edited Winter Moon's Lore. You can read it to see if you like the changes. Let me know what you think. Courteously, Midflare Frost ❄️ |
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Posted 2022-04-03 17:12:50
Lore Type: Pack Name, Link to Den, or Player ID #: #25645 Number of wolves (Minimum - 2 -- Maximum - 10): 3 Name of each wolf: Millow , Magic , Snowdrop Ages (N/A if it does not matter): N/A Brief description of wolf (Coloring, markings, etc.) base : clover , eyes : moon Glow , skin : noctulia , nose : brown , claws : white , slot 1 : moon light agouti 52 % , slot 2 : moonlight aurora 47% , slot 3 , moonlight orante bltoches 53 % , slot 5 : dinar mantle 83 % , slot 7 L white irish 53 % , slot turquise ornate spots : 68 %. Brief description of each wolf's personality -- Maximum of 100 words per wolf: Millow is friendly and very charming wolf. he was chased from his original pack. he was wondering alone not knowing if he would find another pack to go to. Millow than joined the Noel Winter Eve pack. snowdrop was the leader of the Noel Winter Eve pack, she has since passed one. she is the one that took Millow in. she is freindly and accepts any wolf that is lookign for a forever pack. Magic is the first leader of the Noel Winter Eve pack , she gave the pack its name , rules , etc. Magic is no ordinary wolf , fors he has powers like make wolves immortal , bring wolves that have passed for a day , changed base coat color , eye color , add markings , remove markings , etc. Brief idea of what I envision for the lore (Vague idea I want to see expanded on) -- how Millow joined the pack. snowdrop passed away before he turned 5 1/2 months old. Magic is alive and is immortal. she is the one that changed Millow's base to clover. basically a bio to make Millow stand out as a potital stud for other female wolves in other packs. Lands, Environment, Era (Time Period), Territory, Etc. -- Maximum of 50 words: the Noel Winter Eve pack lives in the catskills mountains. as to what the environment is like out side of the Noel Winter Eve territory is up to you. POV: told from Millow's point of view Base Price: 1000 Words Payment Type: SC Extra charges: No Lore Type: Pack please make up a reason why Millow was chased from his orgianl pack. i want to make it clear he didn't have the clover base when he was chased from his orginal apck. https://www.wolvden.com/wolf/4342219 < Millow https://www.wolvden.com/dynasty/wolf/448245 < Snowdrop ( no bio) https://www.wolvden.com/dynasty/wolf/172744 < Magic . the first leader of the pack. ( i know in wolvden site Magic isn't alive , but in my pack lore and pack she is alive , just immortal) i included links to Millow's , Snowdrop's and Magic's page. please let me know if you have any questions about them. |
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