Rate The Lead Wolf Above's Biography

-Rules-

-If Your Lead Wolf Doesn't Have A Biography, You Can Still Post But Don't Expect To Get At Least A 5/10 From The Person Below You

-Rate The Biography 1/10 Through 10/10

-All Of Wolvden Rules Apply Like They Should In Every Forum

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The Person Below Me Can Rate My Lead Wolf's Biography(The Whole Thing, Not Just Where It Says Bio), wolvden.com

7/10! Dojeje's bio was really interesting, especially his backstory. The capital letters kind of threw me off though.

I Really Like Lady Fleur's Biography. 8/10! Sorry I Kind Of Got Into A Habit Of Capitalizing The First Letter Of Each Word.

6/10 It was interesting, but I did find some grammatical errors (lol) and the capitalized letters made it hard for me to read

5/10. Too short for me. aaa i don't want to sound mean

mine was conjured within 15 minutes bc i was speed writing and trying to joT sHit DoWn before i forgot my ideas so,,, it's probably really bad,,

8/10  The first was kinda boring me, but it got better. I don't want to sound mean T-T

mine was made in about 5 minutes because it was late and I was feeling productive for 5 minutes.

8/10   I loved how it made as if you are the wolf meeting her! (also the way the whole thing was formatted as if it happened in the past confused me for a bit) :3

9/10 I like how you described the interactions between the pack members! I love the "slice of life" sort of stories, so it really appeals to me

9/10 

I like how it shows you meeting the lead wolf and learning about the lead wolf from the perspective of someone who has no idea of what it happening.

9/10 

i felt like i was being greeted by the lead wolf.  

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i'm aware that my lead wolf doesn't have a good bio. any tips to improve her bio would be greatly appreciated.