Wolf Ych situation ( already helped but thread is viewable for people who are still interested )

Hello you might be wondering why i'm making this post but the reason I am is because I need a little help with upgrading one of my ychs, down here you'll see options of ychs people mostly choose for there wolf to be put on a ych down below. VVV

Most popular to least ych choices by people's choice:

18 ychs in total so far

 10 ychs in total so far

 9 ychs in total so far  

 7 total ychs so far

4 ychs so far

 7 ychs so far 

3 ychs so far & the ych I want to try to upgrade/improve

So basically sense I first made the soggy ych I knew that this ych wont be the most favorite by people but mostly it was created because I was experimenting on making unique designs to the ychs so they are recognizable & stand out from one another.
So with the soggy ych I was trying to aim towards making it kinda like water theme like fur going downwards like a waterfall but it looked like a soggy wet dog instead & I wanted to try to improve that somehow by your guy's suggestions on how I should fix it so it wont look like a sad wet dog & I hope I can try to revive this ych somehow with your opinions on it.

If your interested in buying yourself one of these ychs ill put a link here for you to check them out.

wolvden.com            

Also Announcement:

Im planning on possibly releasing more ychs & start doing art commissions within the future scene I feel like im getting the hang of doing the chibi commissions, heres a sneak peak of art that i'll be using as examples of. VV

Art I made of my wolves Corn & Crescent. 

Created an au called Frostbitten, this au is about Scourge being reborn as Squrrielflight & slowly regaining their memories. 

Another au I had created is called Molded choice, what happens in this au is that Reedshine dies instead of Appledusk & Mapleshade tries to use Appledusk as a puppet to reach her goal into murdering Oakstar while Reedshine is trying to stop her in starclan to get vengeance from being murdered by her.

Your chibis are adorable as usual <3

For the soggy wolf, since I'm not the best person to give written advice, I drew a wolf based on your reference to sort something out: to give it more "life", you could edit it's expression, or add a bit more fluff to it's chest, maybe?

This is, more or less, how I picture it: the chest may be a bit more  "wild", going in every random direction. The legs are a bit soggy too and fur is basically going everywhere. You could also make it more poofy, adding a little fluff (Maybe rocking a winter coat, with more fur).

I'm so awful at explaining xD that's why I referenced your design to sketch something out

I do like the idea of trying to add more expression on the ych & try to poof out the fluff a little more in a wild way, like possibly when a dog shakes all the water off of its fur & it looks somewhat poofy. 

Also don't worry about your writing advice its pretty well described & I like how you also made a sketch to try to show an example of what it would possibly look like it helps out your writing advice in a good way. 

Here's the results so far, soggy just came out of the dryer XD 

I think it’s adorable! Let’s hope for the best, I love it xD 

Thanks, ill go add it onto the ych post to see what people think of it. ^.^

If that's your new base I'd love to commission it for my lead. I didn't see it on your YWH thread yet.

I havent added it onto the thread yet but yes this is a new base. 

alright the new ych is offically posted onto the thread! :D