LF - Some People To Check Over My Lore
LF - Some People To Check Over My Lore
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Posted 2021-12-26 22:20:37
Not Too Long Ago I Just Finished Writing The Main Parts Of My Lore. While I Think It's Good, I Am Not That Great Of A Writer. And Many Monkey Brains Is Better Than One Monkey Brain. So I Am Looking For, Ideally, Several People To Just Look Over The Beginning Parts Of My Lore. I Want It To Be The Best It Can Be. I Am Looking For Several Things: - Editing (Grammar Mistakes And Ways My Writing Can Flow Better) - Ideas (That Can Improve The Story) - Criticisms Thank You For Reading! Here Is The Lore: The Robotic Eye Pack Lore (Only Read 'The Beginning' and 'The Founders' As Those Are The Only Ones That Are Completed Right Now.) |
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