I wrote this poem for class, what do you think?

I wrote this poem for class, what do you think?
Posted 2023-04-22 12:41:22 #1003051 Stare into the night See yourself A melting statue of tarnished brass From inside Hear the sounds Of distortion ringing Through the glass Hail pounding In the night Frozen steps Through the grass Arriving in a place Soft moonlight, Star filled sky Alone at last	Rayne #119502

Posted 2023-05-14 08:54:45

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It sounds nice but I have no idea what it means. It's your poem though, so I don't have to understand it. Only you do.

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